(warning: this might contain spoilers)
-- a great first line: "When I was lying in the V.A. hospital with a big hole blown through the middle of my life, I started having these dreams that I was flying."
-- a main character, usually an underdog, who isn't expecting to be a hero
-- the underdog hero getting the chick in the end
-- flawed characters
-- women who know how to kick butt
-- forgiveness
-- restoration
-- overcoming impossible odds
-- defeating evil
-- a happy ending
on the other hand, part of me is sorry i watched Avatar. it was a great story. i'm in the middle of a revision and i'm not sure i can write a really great story. i'm comparing myself to James Cameron. not a good idea.
-- a happy ending
on the other hand, part of me is sorry i watched Avatar. it was a great story. i'm in the middle of a revision and i'm not sure i can write a really great story. i'm comparing myself to James Cameron. not a good idea.
i highly recommend it, though i have to warn you, the language isn't great because most of the characters are ex-Marines.