March 8, 2012

finally, a one-liner

just as i was falling asleep, i came up with a one-liner for Black Heart.

"A secret older than Teleria threatens to destroy everything Arathor holds dear."

maybe i'll tweak it. maybe i won't. now i just have to come up with a back cover blurb. oh. and finish the book. yeah. that would be good.

6 comments:

Angela Felsted said...

I like it. That first sentence sucks me right in.

Alex J. Cavanaugh said...

I like it!
I don't know which is more difficult - the back cover synopsis or the logline.

Donetta said...

hope your feeling better

Arlee Bird said...

Oh yeah, finishing the book might be a good idea. I need to do that myself.


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Nicki Elson said...

Congrats on the one liner! I swear, sometimes that's harder than writing the book.

I love the quotes above too - including yours!

Angela Ackerman said...

I love it when you finally hit on the perfect one line pitch...it feels so awesome! You nailed it. :)

Angela